Grimm End #2: The Assassin

Mr. Joshua P. Dunlap was ready for his shave. On a normal day, he would have used his electric razor to clear all the stubble from his face and neck and then he would use a trimmer to edge around the neat mustache and goatee for which he was well known. He was the owner of Dunlap Ford, one of the largest car dealers in a three county area, and had been the face seen in Dunlap Ford’s television commercials for over 30 years.

But it wasn’t a normal day. Mr. Dunlap was dead. According to the coroner, it was a heart attack. Now, rather than lying comfortably in his own bed, he was lying on a cold table under bright florescent lights covered only with a sheet. The cold didn’t matter to him, though.

The cold didn’t matter to Thomas Cross either. It was his job to prepare Mr. Dunlap for his viewing the next morning. He had already washed the man’s silver hair and cut his nails. It was time to give him his last shave. He lathered up the shaving cream in a cup and applied it liberally to Mr. Dunlap’s face and neck. He then used a straight razor to give him a close and clean shave. Most preparers would use a safety razor, but Thomas felt the old-fashioned straight razor was somehow more dignified and gave a cleaner shave.

Even though Thomas was just an employee of Gibson Brothers Funeral Home, Thomas always thought of the people he prepared as his clients. And, Thomas always tried to make his clients look good for their funerals. It was the last time that anyone would ever see them again so he felt that they should look their best.

The brothers Gibson felt that the services that Thomas provided were just an expense that they were obligated to include and they complained about having to pay Thomas each and every payday. Thomas didn’t let it bother him. He knew that his services were important for the family and, in some way he couldn’t quite articulate, he thought it was important to the dearly departed as well.

His phone chimed. It was 6 pm. He wouldn’t normally be at the funeral home that late in the evening, but Mrs. Dunlap had moved his funeral up a couple of days because she had a hard time living in such a big old mansion without the husband she loved so much. She wanted to go away for a while and go through the grieving process at their vacation home in the Bahamas. It was short notice and Thomas knew Mr. Dunlap needed to be ready.

He quickly finished shaving the man and was working on detailing his black mustache and salt and pepper goatee when he heard a slight creaking noise. He paused for a moment; the trimmer poised over Mr. Dunlap’s ample nose. He listened for any more noises. There weren’t any.

Thomas’ station was located in the far corner of the basement below the Funeral Home. There was a swinging door at the bottom of the stairway that led to the upper floor and normally, it would open and swing shut with nothing except a slight whooshing sound. Thomas was used to it creaking like that every once in a while.

He finished Mr. Dunlap’s facial hair. Then, he cleaned up the shaving equipment and grabbed the suit that Mrs. Dunlap had provided for Mr. Dunlap to wear into eternity. Thomas laid out the clothes and started dressing the man when he heard another creaking sound. This time, it wasn’t the door. He recovered Mr. Dunlap with the sheet and turned toward the stairway.

The basement was filled with caskets. The Gibson Brothers used the basement as their showroom. The most expensive caskets were closest to the stairway and they got less expensive the farther away from the stairs they were. The caskets closest to Thomas’ work area were the discounted and bargain basement ones.

All the caskets were as they had been, except for the Crown Royal casket next to the stairway. It was the most expensive casket that the Gibson Brothers had ever carried. It was made of the finest elegant mahogany highlighted with a hand rubbed high gloss finish. Every inch of metal hardware was plated with pure 24 carat gold. And the interior was top of the line champagne velvet. It was the elder Gibson’s goal to either sell it or be buried in it, if it should come to that.

But the lid of the Crown Royal was open. It hadn’t been open a few minutes earlier. The younger Gibson wanted them to remain closed to prevent dust from settling on the linings. Now, it was open. As Thomas watched, the lid began to slowly close again.

He made his way through the line of caskets and placed his hand on the handle of the Crown Royal. After preparing himself, he quickly opened the lid and grabbed the body laying inside by the shirt and hauled him out.

“I told you not to play around in the caskets.” Thomas told his brother.

Daniel Cross laughed as he was hauled out and unceremoniously dumped on the floor. He may have been fifteen, but the sandy haired boy often acted far younger.

“What are you doing here?” Thomas asked.

“The carnival, remember?” Daniel said as he got back up on his feet.

“Is that tonight?”

“Yeah. We talked about it yesterday. Are you ready to go?” Daniel opened the lid of a casket that had a white interior.

“I can’t yet.” Thomas said as he pulled his brother’s hand off the casket lid and closed it again. He looked back at Mr. Dunlap laying under the sheet. He had to be ready in the morning. “You ride with Sara. I’ll meet you there after a while.”

Daniel watched his brother go back to work. The dark-haired boy was Daniel’s opposite in many ways. The worst, to Daniel, was that he never wanted to have fun. He seemed like an old man rather than a nineteen year old.

Daniel left his brother to finish Mr. Dunlap’s preparations and went outside to his sister’s car.


The Salenski Carnival came to Wakina, Minnesota for three days every May. And for two nights, the fairgrounds were packed with teenagers, families and carnies.

Thomas found Daniel eating cheese curds by the First Lutheran Church food booth. Sara was talking on her phone nearby. She still had her baseball jersey on from that afternoon’s game. The seventeen-year-old had earned a place as pitcher on the boys baseball team for their High School, the Wakina Lions.

“Who’s she talking to?” Thomas asked.

“Mom. She probably doesn’t want us to stay out too late.” Daniel said.

Mary Cross was always worried about her three kids. She had raised the kids by herself after their dad died ten years earlier. She didn’t have any other family to help out since she was an only child and her parents died years ago. So, she worried a lot.

Sara snapped her phone shut. She turned to go sit down at the picnic table with her brothers and ran into a tall man wearing gray overalls.

“I’m sorry. I guess I wasn’t looking.” She said. She looked up at his face. She was startled because, his face seemed odd. It didn’t quite seem real, like some sort of a mask, yet it didn’t seem like a mask at all.

“Be careful.” He told her and walked away into the crowd. Before she could say anything more, he was gone.

“Weird.” She said. She noticed Thomas. “Now that you finally got here, we can have some fun.”

For the next hour, they rode on one ride after another. They rode on a roller coaster that all three of them thought was pretty lame. The went through the haunted house which was not only lame but also barely working. They flipped over and over on the Zipper and even took their frustrations out on each other on the bumper cars.

They were swinging back and forth on the Pirate Ship when Sara noticed him. The man in gray overalls was standing by a electrical shack watching the Pirate Ship ride. She pointed him out to her brothers.

“There’s that man I ran into by that little building. It’s like he’s watching us.” The boys saw him standing there.

“He probably works for the carnival. He’s probably just watching the ride. Not us.” Thomas told her.

A large group of kids walked by in front of him. It was a birthday party judging by the number of balloons the kids were carrying. She lost sight of him behind the balloons and kids for a moment and when the kids moved on, he was gone.

When they got off the ride, she looked for him again, but he was nowhere to be seen.

“Let’s go play some games.” Daniel said and headed for the midway.


“Hey, kid. Show your girlfriend what a wimp you are.” A voice on a loudspeaker said. The three of them glanced around. Across the walkway was a dunking booth. A sad clown wearing an old fashioned checkered swimsuit sat on a board over a tank of water.

“Yeah you. Show her what a wimp you are.” He called to Thomas. “I bet you can’t dunk me.” He motioned at the target next to the tank. The sign above it said “Dunk the Clown.” A carny in front of the booth held out three baseballs.

“She’s my sister.” Thomas called back to him.

“I didn’t know that was legal here.” The clown said and let out a loud, obnoxious laugh.

“Two dollars for three tries.” The carny told them. “Knock him down and you get a prize.” There were clown dolls hanging all around the booth.

“Not much variety.” Daniel said to him but the man just ignored him.

“Make a decision. Don’t let your mind wander. It’s too little to be left out alone.” The clown’s laugh blasted out again.

Thomas paid the man and took the three baseballs. Daniel grabbed his arm.

“Let Sara do it.” He told Thomas quietly. “She’s the all star. And besides, then he’ll be dunked by a girl.” They all smiled as Thomas handed Sara the first ball.

The man in gray overalls stood across the midway watching the three siblings. He looked down at his hand and checked the amulet he held in it. It was a smoky crystal set in a gold circle attached to thin gold chain.

“She must be the man of the house.” The clown said as Sara stepped up to pitch.

She went into her pitching routine, wound up and threw a hard, fast ball. It caught the edge of the target, but the target didn’t move. The ball hit the backdrop of the booth with a resounding thwack.

“You couldn’t hit the ground without gravity.” The clown joked.

Sara was frustrated that she had missed. She tried to shake it off and motioned for Thomas to give her another ball. Thomas handed Sara the second ball. Again, Sara started her routine.

The smoky crystal held by the man in gray overalls started to glow a little. He smiled slightly. Maybe they were the ones after all, he thought.

Sara wound up and threw the ball at the target. There was a metallic whine as the ball again caught the edge of the target. But the target didn’t move and the clown stayed where he was.

“Do you want me to throw that for you?” The clown laughed uproariously.

Sara kicked the front of the booth. Thomas could see that she was angry. He handed the third ball to her. She tried to snatch it from him, but she accidentally dropped it. It bounced against the front of the booth and rolled up against Thomas’ feet.

“A girl throws better than you.” The clown’s laughter echoed across the midway.

The man in gray overalls closed his hand around the brightly glowing crystal and put it away in his pocket.

Thomas picked up the ball. He tossed it in the air. He looked at Sara and she nodded, motioning for him to give her the ball. He tossed it in the air again and looked at the clown. He was still laughing. Finally, he tossed the ball to Sara.

In one smooth motion, Sara grabbed the ball out of the air and threw it as hard as she could at the target.

“A Swing and a, “ The clown started to say. A loud clang rang out in the night air. The clown dropped into the tank and disappeared into the water.

“You got dunked by a girl.” Sara called to the clown who was trying to climb up out of the tank. He looked like a wet dog. She turned to the carny and waited to get her prize.

The carny just stared at the target. The target arm was bent back from the impact and the ball was embedded in the target’s face plate. It was definitely broken and there was going to be a lot of work to put the dunking booth back into working order.

“Excuse me? Can I get my prize?” Sara asked him.

“Go away, kid.” The carny said and turned away from her.

“Hey, I dunked the clown so I should get a prize.” She said.

The carny turned back. “You’ll be lucky we don’t call the cops and have you pay for the damage you did.” He went to examine the target.

“But, I dunked him.” Sara insisted. Thomas and Daniel took her by the arms and led her away. She called back to the carny several times before giving in to her brothers.

“How about we go on the Ferris Wheel?” Thomas suggested.

“I should have gotten a prize.” Sara insisted.

“Let it go, Sara. Let’s go on the Ferris Wheel, Ok?” Daniel asked.

The brothers guided her into the line for the ride. In a few minutes, they were seated on one of the sixteen gondolas. Sara was seated between her brothers.


“Now this is relaxing. Cool night air. We can see all the lights.” Daniel said, glancing at Sara.

Sara sat with her arms folded. She knew her brothers wanted her to calm down. She sat staring out onto the midway. Then, she saw him again. The man in gray overalls was standing next to a ticket booth watching them going up and around on the Ferris Wheel.

“Look. There he is again. By the ticket booth.” Sara said pointing to him. As the gondola dropped closer to the ground, the ticket booth where he was standing disappeared behind the Octopus.

“I don’t see him.” Thomas said.

“I don’t either. Are you sure it was the same guy?” Daniel asked.

“Just wait. When we go back up, you’ll see him right over there.”

The gondola started rising again and the ticket booth came back into view. The man was gone.

“He was there just a minute ago.” She said.

The brothers looked at each other and shrugged. The gondola went around several more times and then slowed to a stop. They were let out after three other gondolas were emptied.

“Hey, this is boring. Let’s do some faster rides.” Thomas suggested.


Daniel stumbled into the fence around the Tilt-A-Whirl. It was the third spinning ride in a row and he was starting to get a little queasy. Thomas roughly guided him through the gate and back out onto the midway.

“Just don’t barf on me.” He told Daniel.

“I’ve had enough of the rides for a while, let’s do something else.” Daniel told them. “Hey, how about getting our fortunes told?” He pointed at the colorful trailer ahead of them.

The trailer had a banner across the top that announced Madame Zella, Psychic and Cosmic Sooth Sayer. A number of symbols were scattered across the face of the trailer including a deck of cards, a hand and a crystal ball. A sign on a post near the door said that Madame Zella would look into your future for only $5.00 per 15 minute session.

“There no line. Want to go in?” Thomas asked.

“That’s all just bull.” Sara said and started walking toward the Himalaya.

“I’d like to see my future.” Daniel said.

“If you want to waste your money, go ahead.” Sara said and sat down on a bench nearby.

“Come on, Sara. Let’s all go in together.” Daniel said. Thomas nodded in agreement.

“As long as I don’t have to pay for it.” Sara said and followed them into the trailer.

Inside, they were greeted by Paula, Madame Zella’s assistant. She took the money and led them through a curtained doorway into what appeared to be an old Victorian parlor. A large round table was in the center of the room with an ornate stain glass hanging light shining down on it.

Around the table were several high-backed wooden chairs with plush cushions and a larger chair that would be more at home in a throne room than a parlor. The larger chair was swiveled to face away from the table and the room’s entrance. Paula motioned for them to sit in the wooden chairs and then left the room.

On the table in front of them were a deck of cards fanned out, a bell and something the size of a small basketball under a cloth near the larger chair. The rest of the room was dark.

They waited for several minutes for the psychic to come in. Sara looked at her watch. Thomas and Daniel looked at each other. Daniel shrugged.

“Madame Zella has the power to see into the future and know what your fortune will be.” A woman’s voice said. “What is it that you want Madame Zella to find out for you?” The voice had an exaggerated accent like one from some Eastern European country. The larger chair swiveled around and Madame Zella was revealed.

“We want to know our sister’s future.” Daniel said pointing at Sara.

“What?” Sara looked at her brothers.

“Yes. Tell us what the future has in store for her.” Thomas said, laughing.

“Very well. And how do you want me to divine the future? Should I read your palm? The Tarot cards? Or, should I consult my crystal ball?”

The three teenagers were amazed that she was able to say all that with a straight face.

Sara didn’t believe in any of it. But, she picked the crystal ball simply because she wanted to see what the it looked like.

“Very well.” Madame Zella said. She pulled the covered ball toward herself and centered it in front of her. Then, she slipped the cover off and draped it over the arm of her chair. A dim glow could be seen in the center of the ball. Otherwise, the ball looked like a plain glass ball about 10” in diameter.

“Spirits of the Netherworld.” Madame Zella commanded as she started to wave her hands around the ball. “I call on you to communicate to me the future of this young girl.”

Daniel began to giggle. Thomas kicked him under the table. Daniel tried to kick Thomas back.

“A window into the future is opening.” Madame Zella said. She peered closely at the crystal ball. The glow in the center began to get brighter. The three siblings leaned closer to try to see something, anything, inside the ball.

“There is an important competition in your future, Miss Cross. It is Miss Cross, isn’t it?” She said. Sara nodded and rolled her eyes at her brothers. She pointed to her name on the back of her jersey.

“I see a field. A baseball…” Madame Zella suddenly stopped. Her eyes grew wide as she looked into the glowing ball which started to glow even brighter. The three teenagers couldn’t see anything in the ball, it had become too bright for them.

“No. That’s not a field. It’s a, a cemetery.” The woman, speaking without an accent, seemed entranced with the vision that she was having. “There are many people around a small building. A mausoleum, I think. You’re inside. You aren’t dead though, no, you are very much alive.”

”You say something to crowd and then go back inside. They come towards the door and… Oh..” She suddenly stops and looks at the ball in horror. “Oh, my god!” She screamed and shielded her face with her arms.

She turned her face from the crystal ball and quickly grabbed at the cloth hanging from the arm of the chair. She tossed it over the ball and once the ball was completely covered, she buried her head in her arms on the table and started to cry.

Just as the three of them stood up to help her, Paula came into the room and rushed over to Madame Zella.

“What’s wrong Zella?” She asked. Zella waved her off and continued to cry. Paula turned on the teenagers. “What did you do to her?”

“We didn’t do anything.” Daniel said.

“No more today, Paula.” Zella said between sobs. “No more.”

“What did you see?” Sara demanded.

“Out. All of you.” Paula yelled at them. “We’re closed.”

Zella tried to say something.

“What is it, Zella?” Paula leaned closer.

“Give them their money back.” Zella said and then laid her head back down on the table.

“Here’s your money.” Paula said and pulled a wad of cash from her pocket. She gave them a five dollar bill. “Now out with you.”

“What did you see?” Sara repeated.

“She saw nothing. Just go.” Paula herded them out the doorway and then down the front steps of the trailer. She slammed the door shut. A sign hung on the outside that said, “Madame Zella is consulting the spirit world. Please come back later.”

“Why wouldn’t she tell us what she saw?” Sara asked her brothers.

“I don’t know.” Thomas said.

“She’s supposed to, isn’t she?” Daniel asked no one in particular.

“It’s almost midnight. Let’s just go home.” Thomas said.


Sara was quiet all the way to the parking lot. Daniel did stop on the way out and buy a caramel apple dipped in peanuts, but Thomas and Sara said they weren’t hungry. When they got to their cars, Thomas broke the silence.

“Daniel will ride with you, Sara.”

“I’m fine.” Sara told him. She got into her car and started it.

Daniel was going to ride home with his brother. But, when he saw Thomas nod to Sara’s car, he reluctantly hurried over to it.

“Wait up, Sara. I’m going with you.” He said and got in. Thomas followed them home in his car.

“I’m sorry you had a bad night.” Daniel said after several minutes of silence.

“I’m Ok.” Sara said and sighed. She looked over at the partially eaten apple. “Can I have a little?”

“Have all you want.” Daniel said handing her what was left. He had eaten most of the bottom half with the peanuts, but there was a good portion of the top left.

“Thanks.” She said and took a bite. Nothing more was said until they got home.


The house was dark when the three of them got home. Although it was late and their mother was probably in bed sleeping, she usually left the front light on for them. That night, it was off.

Thomas unlocked the door and switch on the front hall light. It flashed on but immediately went off again. He flicked the switch several more times. But, the hallway stayed dark.

“It must have tripped the breaker.” Thomas said. He went into the living room, the dining room and finally into the kitchen, trying lights as he went, but they all remained off.

“Maybe the power is off.” Daniel suggested.

“I’ll check the breakers.” Thomas said and headed for the basement stairs.

“I need something to drink.” Daniel said. He opened the refrigerator and rummaged through the darkness inside. “Everything is still cold.”

“I’m going to bed.” Sara said and headed upstairs to her room. The light on the stairs didn’t work either. She tried the upstairs hallway light and, like all the others, it remained off.

She noticed that there was a soft glow coming from her mother’s bedroom. She went to see if she was still up. She wondered why she had light in her room when the power seemed to be out everywhere else in the house.

“Mom?” She said softly as she neared the doorway.

Just as she passed her bedroom, someone grabbed her from behind. A gloved hand clamped over her mouth, his arm trapping hers against her body. Her other wrist was pulled up behind her back. She was held immobile against the person. She tried to struggle.

“Do you want to live?” The man whispered into her ear. She nodded. “Then be quiet.” He told her.

She thought about how she could get away. But she needed to warn her mother and brothers. She looked in her mother’s room. It was then that she noticed that the glow wasn’t an electric light. It was moving. A candle, She thought?

When it moved where she could see it, she took in a breath to scream. The man felt her stiffen.

“Don’t make a sound.” He whispered. She barely heard it.

The thing was roughly the size of a small man, maybe five feet tall. Although it was shaped like a person, it seemed to be made up entirely of flames. Sara had the impression that it was looking for something even though it had no facial features that she could see.

Sara’s mind tried to comprehend what she was seeing. Then she remembered her mother was in the room with it. She began to struggle and call out to her. The man holding her pulled her tighter.

“Quiet.” He hissed in her ear. “Or it will find you.”

Sara stopped struggling as that realization sunk into her. Find her? That horrible thing, whatever it was, was looking for her?

It slowly made its way to the hallway. It didn’t walk like a human would, it moved along the floor like a flame would dance along a log in a fireplace. As it got closer, panic started to well up inside her. She began to struggle again.

“Stop.” The man commanded quietly.

The lights came on in the hallway. When it saw Sara, the flames suddenly grew in size until it filled the doorway and lapped against the ceiling.

The man shoved Sara down the hallway towards the stairs. She stumbled and fell towards the wall and landed on the floor. She immediately was up on her knees and looked back toward her mother’s door.

The man in gray overalls stood facing the flame monster. He had a bag in his hand and he poured what appeared to be a white powder into his other palm. As the flames billowed out toward him, he blew the powder into the air between them.

As the powder came into contact with the flames, she heard a shrill cry and the flames died down and backed away. She felt a blast of cold air blow down the hallway.

Though the flame creature had retreated, the flames on the ceiling continued to burn and they were spreading to the walls.

“Go. Now.” The man called back to her.

“My mom.” She yelled back. “She’s in there.”

“I’ll get her out.” The man yelled. “You must go.”

The man disappeared into her mother’s room. She heard the shrill cry again and another cold wind blew down the hall. Sara got up and ran to the doorway, shielding herself from the growing flames around it.

“What the hell?” Thomas said from the top of the stairs. He stood staring in disbelief at his sister standing under a canopy of fire at their mother’s bedroom door. Daniel stood below him trying to see around him.

“I’m getting mom.” She told them. “Call 911.”

She looked back in the room to see the man had the fire creature trapped against the bedroom window. Most of the room was in flames. Her mom was unconscious on the bed, the edges of the blanket was already burning. She ran to the bed and pulled the blanket off her.

The man blew another handful of powder at the creature. But the creature seem ready this time and leapt out of the way. It rushed at Sara. Sara raised her arms to ward off the flames. The heat enveloped her just briefly before she felt a freezing blast of cold and heard the scream again all around her. She fell to the floor, holding her hands over her ears.

Thomas and Daniel pulled her up off the floor. She looked around wildly. The fire creature was gone but the house was still on fire. The man in gray overalls had picked up her mother and was carrying her to the doorway.

“Out of the house.” He shouted at them.

Thomas and Daniel pulled Sara with them down the stairs and to the front door. The man carried their mother out into the night right behind them.

The man ran across the street and laid her on the boulevard. He checked her for injuries.

“They must have given her something that made her sleep. She doesn’t seem hurt otherwise. No injuries or smoke.” The man told them.

“What was that thing?” Sara demanded.

“It was a Djinn.” He said.

“A Djinn? Like a genie?” Daniel asked.

“Something like that. This was an evil creature. It meant to kill you.”

“You knew it was coming after us?” Thomas asked.

“I was told you were in danger. I didn’t know what it would be. I was sent to watch over you.”

“Who are you?” Sara asked.

“My name is Franklin.” the man said.

“Who sent you?” Thomas asked.

“My grandfather.” A woman’s voice answered. Their mother was sitting up looking at them.

“You never told us that we had any relatives that were still alive.” Thomas said.

“He and my mother decided that it was safer. We pretended he didn’t exist. He pretended that we didn’t exist. That way no one would know about you.”

“Why?” Daniel asked.

“Because he has enemies and he feared that they might try what they did tonight.” Their mother said. They all looked at the house. The flames were everywhere. A distant siren could be heard getting closer.

It was then that Sara noticed the man in gray overalls was gone.

“Where did he go?”

“It’s best that he not get involved.” Mary said.

“But he could be hurt. He should’ve waited for the ambulance.” Sara said. The fire truck, siren blaring and lights flashing, came around the corner and pulled up in front of the house. The firemen jumped off and went to work.

“He could have been killed.” Sara said watching the house being destroyed by the fire.

“No.” Mary said. “You can’t kill someone who’s already dead.”


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Grimm End #1: The Sisters

The sun had already set when Molly Blair slipped down the servant stairs to the kitchen. It had been several hours since the evening meal and she found the dark kitchen clean and deserted. She checked again to make sure that she had the neatly folded old papers in her pocket. This is the last time, she thought to herself. After tonight, her debt is paid.

She glanced out through the dining room as she passed the swinging door that had been propped open for the night. The chandelier’s crystals refracted the last light of the evening, sending little dots of light here and there throughout the room. She hurried to the door leading outside. That door served as the servant’s entrance to the house as well as the door where delivery men would drop off sides of beef, cases of wine and packages of all shapes and sizes supplying the household with everything it needed. But at this time of night, it would be as forgotten as the kitchen. A moment later, she was out in the cool evening air and running across the yard to the trees.

Once she was concealed in the woods that surrounded the yard, she stopped to catch her breath. She looked back at the house. While most of the people who lived there referred to it as “The House”, it was actually a large mansion that was built on a bluff overlooking the town and lake below it. The turrets towering high above the grounds and the grotesque gargoyles lining the roofs made it seem almost menacing in the growing darkness. Though the official name of the property was Rim End because it was perched at the end of a rim of bluffs that surrounded the town, the townspeople called it Grimm End because of its dark history. She could see that lights were on in several of the windows, but it didn’t seem like anyone had seen her leave.

If she had been going to town on mansion business or if she had the night off, she could have gotten a ride into town. The business she had in town that night, however, was not something that she could let anyone in the mansion know about. She took one last look at the house and started on her long hike to town.

She didn’t like walking through the woods anytime let alone at night. She always had that odd feeling that someone was watching her. But, she couldn’t risk following the cobblestone driveway down to the iron gates. If someone discovered that she was walking to town, there would be questions that she wouldn’t want to answer.

Her employer was a man named C. J. Kask, an elderly man who had made his money early in life traveling the world in search of strange artifacts. He would then put them on display in one the many museums that he owned. In recent years though, he rarely left the house, let alone the country. He still had secrets, though. Secrets that other people were willing to pay for. Or blackmail for.

A twig snapped and she instantly stopped and looked around. She held her breath willing herself to be as silent as she could. Then she heard it again, a twig snapped closer. She almost screamed when a small dark shape came out of a bush nearby. It stopped when it saw her and then turned and ran. She recognized the faint white stripes down the creatures back as it fled. It was only a skunk. She let out her breath and almost laughed out loud.

She got to the gates without seeing anyone or anything more and was soon off the mansion grounds and on the road into town.


A cool breeze blew along the road and Molly pulled her jacket closed around her. It was early May and, in Minnesota, that meant the days were warm and the evenings were still cool. It had been almost a year since she had come to work for Mr. Kask. She was an upstairs maid which meant that she cleaned a lot of bedrooms and bathrooms. It also meant that she had access to Mr. Kask’s private study just off his bedroom and she was in that study earlier that evening.

C. J. Kask was a man of habits. And one of the habits that Molly had come to count on was that he would work in his study for several hours in the morning and several hours in the afternoon. At exactly 6 pm, he would go down for his usual dinner. Each night of the week had its standard menu that never changed. Tonight, it was pork chops, mashed potatoes and gravy. After dinner he would go into the library on the main floor and not be seen again for hours afterward.

At a little past six, Molly would then be free to search around his study under the pretense of cleaning. Several times, she found some information that she thought would be worth smuggling out. Most of the time, there was nothing valuable. Tonight was different.

Tonight, she found his will. And while many people would be interested in the long list of possessions that were being divvied up in the document, she knew that the information that would settle her debt was the list of names and addresses of the people who stood to inherit from the old man. She folded the document up, put it away in her pocket and waited for her opportunity to deliver it in town.

She saw lights ahead of her on the road. She thought about ducking into the woods but that would probably call more attention to her than being caught out on the road at night. As the car neared, it started slowing and stopped next to her. It was a Crow County Sheriff’s Department patrol car. Sheriff Richard Marco smiled at her from the open window.

“Getting some air?” Marco asked. He was a large man; muscular, not overweight. He filled the driver’s seat of the car. His teeth were yellow from years of chain smoking and coffee drinking. But it was his eye that disturbed her. The pupil of his right eye was almost completely colorless. It didn’t affect his sight. It just made other people uncomfortable and the Sheriff seemed to enjoy that.

“Uh, yeah. Just out for a little walk.” She tried to smile back at him.

“Lonely piece of road.” He said nodding down the road behind her.

“I guess.”

“Don’t want anything to happen to you. You never know what kind of folk may be out looking for trouble.”

“There isn’t much crime around here.”

“I don’t necessarily mean that kind of folk.

“You don’t mean those fairy tales of dead people and werewolves that the old people in town talk about, do you? Those are just old wives tales.”

“I ain’t no old wife, but I’ve seen some strange things in my life. The Dead and Shifters are real. It’s best not to push your luck when their concerned.”

“I can handle myself. I took a self-defense class.”

“Uh huh. Heard anything from that brother of yours?”

“Jack? Not since he left town.” She kicked at a rock with her foot. Her brother was the last thing she wanted to talk to the Sheriff about.

“That’s a long time. Been a year, hasn’t it?” He asked.

“Just about. We never were very close.” She said. They hadn’t been very close. It still wasn’t like her brother not to call every couple of months even if it was just to ask for money. She knew that he was scared the last time she saw him even though she had cleaned up the mess he was in.

“You know, I never had much against him. Rounded him up a couple of times when he was a boy trespassing on Mr. Kask’s land. But nothing like that last trouble.”

She remembered him sneaking off to play in a little cave by the stream running through the mansion’s property. He said it was a fort and he was guarding it. “He was always a good brother.” She told him.

“I know. Well, you be careful out here.” He flashed his yellow teeth at her again.

“I will.” She said and started walking towards town. She heard the car drive away down the road behind her. She didn’t look back.


It was almost a half hour later when she arrived at the western edge of Shadow Bluffs. There, the road took a long loop around the old Elmwood Cemetery. Elmwood was the oldest and largest cemetery in the area. It was rarely used anymore, though, and had become overgrown and decayed. The newer Rosemont Cemetery in the north part of town was were people were buried now.

Normally, during the day, she would take a shortcut through the cemetery rather than follow the road all the way around it. But not at night. She stayed on the road all the way around and followed it to the square at the center of town.

Shadow Bluffs was just a small town, only a several hundred people. When the sun went down, everything closed up. Everything except for the little cafe on the square. The sign across the building proclaimed it to be Carson’s Diner, home of Della’s World-Famous Meatloaf. Della Carson had been the owner of the diner until she died about twenty years ago. Her son, Willie, was the owner now. Tonight, like pretty much any night, there were a good number of people having a little coffee and a slice of their fresh baked blueberry or apple pie or maybe having a late dinner of their world-famous meatloaf.

All the businesses on the main square were well-kept and clean. Places that customers would be comfortable and even proud to shop. The streets that ran just behind those on the square may have been only a block away, but the shops there seemed like they were a world away. Many were run down and most were disreputable. The shopkeepers there would be just as willing to steal your wallet as sell you something. Molly’s destination was one of those streets.

She glanced down both directions on the street before she tapped on the old wood door of the Golden Lamp Pawn Shop. The windows were dark and the sign was off. She knew her arrival was expected. Not expected really as much as required. Despite the cool night breeze blowing through the town, she was starting to sweat.

She tapped again a little louder. She stepped back and looked up at the second floor windows. It wasn’t surprising that no light shone out onto the empty street. She’d only been up to that room a handful of times but, day or night, the windows had always been heavily covered with draperies with no sign that they were ever opened.

The loud thunk of the door’s deadbolt sliding open startled her. She closed her eyes and tried to will her racing heart to slow down. She took a deep breath, let it out and opened her eyes again. The door was partly open and a dim light spilled out onto the sidewalk in front of the small shop.

She gently pushed the door open a little more and slipped into the building entrance. It was an old building with white plaster walls, high ceilings and a colorful mosaic tile floor faded into dullness over the years. A door to the side had the name of the pawn shop stenciled on beveled glass along with a sign hanging from a suction cup on the inside of the window stating that the shop was closed. Ahead of her was a steep stairway leading to the second floor of the building. Standing on the third step, staring blankly at her, was a dark-haired Asian girl who was eight or nine years old.

“Good Evening, Asami,” Molly said softly as she closed the door. The girl made no reply. She simply turned and headed up the stairs. She had no difficulty climbing the stairs rapidly despite the long brown dress that she wore. All three of the women who lived there wore dresses made of the same plain brown fabric. It made Molly think of the robes worn by ancient druids who worshiped nature. Except these druids lived in an apartment above a pawn shop.

She followed the girl up the stairs and paused for a moment at the top landing. Asami held the door to the apartment open for her. The acrid smell of incense billowed out from inside and the light changed from dull white light in the stairwell to red-tinted one inside the apartment.

The little girl tilted her head toward the open doorway and waited. Although Asami seemed innocent enough, Molly was afraid of her. She was afraid of all the Moira sisters. She took a quick breath and went inside.

Piri was seated at a small round table covered with a dark red table cloth. There were only two lights on in the room. One focused down on the table where Piri was seated reading some papers and the other next to the hallway where Molly entered illuminating a comfortable burgundy winged-back chair. Piri motioned for her to sit.

Molly sat and waited. Suddenly, Piri threw the papers onto the table and stood up. She snatched a cane that leaned against a chair beside her and made her way over to Molly. She was a tall and slender woman with white-gray hair that contrasted with her dark skin. The hand that she held out to Molly was as wrinkled as the old woman’s face.

Molly pulled the folded sheets of paper from her coat pocket and handed it to the woman who promptly turned and settled herself back at the table. She unfolded the papers, smoothed them out and squinted down at them.

The room looked the same as the first time she’d come to them. Her brother had been in trouble. An elderly man had been attacked and ended up in the hospital. His wallet and a small amount of cash was stolen. The old man later identified her brother as the attacker. He recognized the blue jacket and worn Twins baseball cap that her brother always wore. The wallet was found in her brother’s apartment. He denied having anything to do with the attack and had no explanation of how the wallet had gotten there. He was facing a long time in jail. Molly came to the sisters because they had a reputation for being able to make problems go away. And they did. The charges were dropped and her brother was advised to leave town.

Shortly afterward, she was asked to come see the sisters again. It was then that they asked for their payment. She was to get a job at Grimm End and try to find anything she could on the whereabouts of any of Mr. Kask’s family. They never told her why and she never asked. Now that she was able to get them a list of his family members’ names and addresses, she had more than paid for their services with those papers and a year of her life.

Molly looked at the three women. She always wondered why they were known as sisters when the three women couldn’t be more different. Asami was Asian and just a child. Piri was an ancient black woman and would have been more of a grandmother or even a great-grandmother than a sister to Asami. And then there was Dior.

“Is it anything useful, Piri?” A voice came from a shadowy corner near the front draped windows. From her voice, Molly had always pictured Dior as a young woman but she had never seen her in the light.

“It’s what you wanted, names and addresses.” Molly said. “That should be enough to…” Molly stopped when a small hand touched her shoulder. She looked up at Asami who merely shook her head. Piri had stopped reading and was glaring at her as well.

She sat back in the chair as Asami pulled another chair up to the small table and sat by the old woman. The two of them looked over the papers before Piri finally spoke.

“Yes” Piri said scowling up at Molly. “It tells us what we wanted to know.”

Dior rose quickly and stood behind the old woman. Molly gasped when she saw the woman’s hand as she picked up the papers. The little finger was missing from her left hand.

The three women stiffened at her gasp. Piri and Asami looked at Molly and then up at Dior. Dior slowly set the papers on the table and backed out of the light. Molly could feel the air in the room change. She began to sweat again from the heat.

“So?” Dior asked from the shadows. Molly could hear the edge in her voice. “You feel you have fulfilled your end of the bargain?”

“Yes, you wanted me to find out where they were and I did. That should make us even.” Molly said, looking down at her hands in her lap. Her voice sounded more confident than she felt. She braced herself for an angry outburst.

“We are more than even.” Dior said quietly. Molly looked up at her shadowy form in surprise. Even Asami and Piri abruptly turned toward her.

“More than even?” Piri repeated.

“Yes, this information is worth far more than the trivial favor we did for Molly’s poor brother.” Dior said and sat back down in her chair in the corner. “Thank you for your help, Molly. You are free to go.”

Molly sat staring at Dior. Only when Asami and Piri turned back to look at her did she move.

“Thank you, Dior.” Molly said and quickly turned to leave.

“No” Dior said. “Thank you, Molly.” Just as Molly was about to open the apartment door, her heart skipped a beat.

“Oh, and Molly” Dior called to her from her place in the shadows. Molly stopped with her hand on the doorknob. She slowly looked back toward the place she thought the woman was sitting. “You have nothing to worry about. You’ve done well. We will take care of you.”

Molly smiled faintly and then hurried out into the hallway. She rushed down the stairs and out into the street. Only then did she allow herself to relax.

The three women were silent after Molly left. When they heard the door to the street close again, Piri stood up to face Dior.

“What was all that about?” Piri asked. “It took her forever to find this little bit of information.”

“I know. I know.” Dior told her. “I knew before she even came here tonight that we were done with her. Those papers she brought were just a lucky break.”

“You knew that?” Asami asked.

“We can’t be done with her. She knows too much about what we’re looking for.” Piri said angrily.

“Ah, but we are done with her, Piri. I told her that we’d take care of her and, true to my word, I have already arranged for her to be taken care of.”

Piri sat back down at the table and frowned at the papers still laying there. Asami looked at Dior and smiled.


The road back to the mansion wound up through the hills above the little town for a couple miles. Molly never liked sneaking out to see the Moira women. It always meant a long walk to town and back.

When she was almost back to the entrance to the mansion grounds, she saw that there was a car parked at the side of the road. It wasn’t running and its lights were off. She crossed to the opposite side of the road to pass by it. When she was along side it, she realized that it was the Sheriff’s patrol car and the driver’s door was open. The Sheriff was nowhere to be seen. She hurried ahead to get away from the road and back to the mansion as fast as she could.

She saw something move slowly out from the trees ahead of her. She stood still in the middle of the road. She felt that she should run. The gate to the mansion’s driveway was several hundred yards ahead and the creature was between the gate and her. It was too far back to town.

The creature raised its head and Molly realized it was just a deer. It looked towards Molly and stood still also. She let out a sigh of relief.

“It’s OK.” She said aloud more to herself than to the deer. It started to lower its head again and then snapped back up as Molly began to take a step. It suddenly bounded up the road and within seconds it was past the gate and disappearing into the darkness.

“You don’t have to be afraid of me.” She called to it.

She had just taken another step when a low growl rumbled from the road behind her. She turned around and fear gripped her again as she saw a huge mountain lion that stood just paces from her. The moonlight gleamed off its eyes making it appear even more hellish.

With terror welling up inside her, she turned and ran as fast as she could up the road toward the gate. She had just reached it when the creature slammed her against the metal bars with its powerful body. Pain shot through her head and chest as she fell back to the ground. She tried to catch her breath, but the force of the impact and the pain shooting through her chest every time she took a breath made it difficult.

The big cat circled around her. She knew that if she didn’t do something quick, she would die right there by the gate. Then she saw that the impact had caused the gate to open a little. She only hoped it would be enough. She felt around in the gravel next to her until she found a good sized rock.

As the animal circled back around toward her head again, she flipped toward it and brought the rock down on its head as hard as she could. The creature was knocked to the ground and in that moment, she pushed herself up and stumbled toward the gate, fighting the pain that wracked her body. She slipped through the opening and slammed it behind her. As she slid the bolt to latch it, the big cat leapt at the gate. The gate held but one of the cat’s claws caught her arm, ripping a long gash into it. She cried out in pain and stumbled back. She gripped her arm in agony.

The cat was now on the outside of the fence pacing and looking for a way past it. It tried to leap over the fence. She was amazed and horrified at the height that the cat could jump. It only succeeded in injuring itself on the pointed posts that lined the top of the fence.

The cat stopped its pacing and jumping. It just stood there, growling and staring at Molly. Then she saw it. The cat’s right eye was almost completely white. Her mouth opened in horror. No sound came out. It couldn’t be, she thought. They’re not real.

She turned and ran up the road toward the mansion. She was feeling weak from the pain and loss of blood but she pushed herself as hard as she could.

She had only gotten a couple of hundred yards up the driveway when she heard something running fast through the forest to her right. It passed her rapidly and a few seconds later, the cat sprang out of the trees and landed on the pavement ahead of her. It stood and glared at her. She could barely bring herself to look at its colorless eye.

She plunged into the trees to her left and ran wildly through the underbrush. Twigs and branches caught at her and she stumbled over dead branches on the ground, but she pushed on. Now and then, she could hear the cat behind her, sometimes off to her left and sometimes off to her right. It seemed like it was herding her through the forest. Then she heard the sound of the little stream ahead of her. Did it think she was going to be trapped at the stream?

Then she remembered her brother’s cave. If she could get to it without the cat seeing her, she could hide there until it went away. She ignored the pain searing through her limbs and ran harder toward the sound of the water.
She came to the stream only a short distance from where the cave was. She ran along the stream until she was above it and then leapt down in front of the hole. She rolled backward into the cave and laid still. She was breathing hard. She tried to muffle that by pulling her jacket over her mouth.

Quickly, she realized it wasn’t her jacket. It was a darker color and she gagged at the terrible smell. She eased her key ring out from her pocket and shined her key light on the material. It was a rotten sleeve of a dirty blue jacket. Worst of all, there was a bony hand still in the sleeve.

She quickly sat up and shined the light on the place she had been laying. The body of a man was sprawled where she had come to rest. The head, which had been separated from the rest of his body, still wore a Twins baseball cap. Even in the dim light, she knew that it had been her brother. He had never left town.

A growl from the entrance brought her back from the horror of discovering her missing brother’s body. The cat stood at the entrance.

“You wanted me to find him, didn’t you.” She yelled at the beast. “Didn’t you. You killed him.” She got on her knees and started throwing any rocks that she could find at the cat. It tried to avoid the rocks but after a couple of good hits, it screamed with anger. The small cave echoed with the terrible sound.

The cat leapt at the girl. The girl, her own anger masking the pain that she was in, pushed herself up, met the creature’s body in mid-leap and knocked it aside into the wall of the cave. She then lunged for the cave opening.

She only got her upper body through the opening before another horrific pain shot through her as the animal bit into her left shin. She tried to kick but the pain from her injuries were finally overwhelming her. The animal’s jaw locked onto her leg and pulled her back down into the cave.

The animal released her leg and she rolled over to face the creature. It stood over her snarling, the one eye holding her attention and flooding her with terror. She tried to scoot backwards using her elbows but missed the opening and ended up with her back to cave wall. The creature stepped forward toward her.

The cat leapt at her again. She tried to roll to one side but only ended up face down in the mud with her back to the beast. It scratched at her back tearing through her clothes and ripping at her skin. The pain and the terror overwhelmed her as the beast’s powerful jaw clamped down on her neck from behind. The pain became the only thing that she was aware of. It was also the last thing she was aware of as the creature crushed the bones and ripped through the arteries in her neck. She lost consciousness just after the beast began to feed.


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Ghosts of Books Past

When I was a young lad, I would read about the adventures of Frank and Joe Hardy, the Hardy Boys. On some Saturdays or gloomy summer days, I would ready one of them from cover to cover.

Recently, my lovely wife, who herself enjoyed reading about Nancy Drew when she was a wee lass, asked me to read a Hardy Boys mystery to her. The teenagers in my Grimm End books reminded her of a more grown up version of those books and she wanted to hear one again to compare them.

Despite the abundant use of adverbs, the overly dramatic dialog and the resemblance between the police in the books with the keystone cops of the movies, the basic story is actually enjoyable.

There are worse things than being compared to the Hardy Boys, he said humorously.

I have a problem.

My name is Steven and I am an incessant planner.

One of my biggest problems with writing is wanting to understand the story completely before putting words down on a page. This planning goes on endlessly and gives me the perfect excuse for not actually writing. I can’t start writing, I don’t know where the story is going yet.

And on it goes.

I wrote my first 50,000 words about Grimm End for the NaNoWriMo event in November, 2006. It was a useful and satisfying exercise because it taught me that I can turn off my internal editor who usually prevents me from writing at high speed. It also was a setback because the direction that the story took was meandering and mostly boring.

Although I was able to lock out my internal editor, my internal planner became more powerful than I ever imagined.

I have been giving this problem some thought this week and I think that I have an idea that may work for me, at last. It borrows a little from software development, my day job. I’ll let the idea germinate a little more and, if it seems like it might work for me, I’ll post an outline of it in the near future.

NaNoWriMo

Every year in November, National Novel Writing Month challenges participants to write 50,000 words in 30 days. I participated in 2006 when I wrote my first attempt at a Grimm End story. Unfortunately, I haven’t been able to participate since.

Therefore, this year, I am attempting my own novel writing month in September. I’m running a little behind as yet, but I have every hope to end the month with the first 50,000 words of a new draft of Grimm End.

Grimm End

Shrouded in mist on the shores of Lake Superior, the small town of Grimm End sprang up almost a century ago around the the ancestral home of Cornelius J. Kask, master showman and collector of dark antiquities.

Now, Thomas, Sara and Daniel Cross are moving into the mansion with their mother, the new cook. Before long, they find themselves tangled in the mysteries of the strange people that call Grimm End their home as well as the dark secrets hidden in the old mansion.

In 2011, join the Cross teens as they begin to unravel the web of secrets and discover the evil lurking not only in the misty town but also in the dark recesses of their new home.